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Post by Claire Benette on Oct 26, 2007 19:10:49 GMT -5
It was a small cafe on the corner of the street and it was rarely visited that often. But it was a nice little place to stop and relax. The food was good and the coffee was the best around.
Claire Benette was working there as a waitress. She had deciced that she needed to earn some money, she didn't know if Peter wanted her to pay rent. So she had gotten herself a job just incase.
It was lunch time when the girl clocked in to start her shift. A shift that she was 5 minutes late for. "Claire.... your late", the owner called. He was a middle aged Italian man with a fantastic head for business. "Sorry Antonio", Claire shouted as she put on her apron and picked up her note book and pencil.
She was just making her rounds in taking orders when...
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Post by Sindi Symes on Oct 29, 2007 1:39:14 GMT -5
Sindi walked into the ttle Cafe' and sat at a table and waited sind (Her nick name) was dressed in a cute little pink summer dress and her long hair was pined up on top of her head she was only new ith the guys but everybody seemed to no who she was becouse one of the things she could do was the same as that Claire Benntts power and that bothered Sindi becouse she liked to be one of a kind totally unique
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Post by Sophia on Oct 29, 2007 9:45:00 GMT -5
Sindi walke ntothe ttle Cafe' and sat at a table and waited sind was dressed in a cute little pink summer dress and her long hair was pined up on top of her head she was only new ith the guys but everybody seemed to no who she was becouse one of the things she could do was the same as that Claire Benntts power and that botheredSindi ecouse she liked to be one of a kind totally unqick(SP?) Sindi walked into the little Cafe and sat at a table and waited. Sindi was dressed in a cute little pink summer dress and her long hair was pinned up on top of her head. She was only new with the guys but everybody seemed to no who she was because one of the things she could do was the same as Claire Bennett's power. That seemed to bother Sindi, she liked to be one of a kind, totally unique. Hey hun! Try to roleplay like this . It's very good but it could be a little better! I've edited it to make it more understandable. Everytime you post, don't forget to spell check, it makes reading your post easier. Also, remember, capital letters when it's a name, place etc. So, don't forget to capitalize your characters name. When writing sentences, don't make them too long, that's only in certain circumstances. Try to add a few commas to break up the sentence or just add a full stop. Your posts are superb, just try and follow this and you'll be even better! <3
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Post by Lucifer on Oct 30, 2007 5:17:15 GMT -5
Horus stumbled into the cafe' and sat down at the neerest table, he hadn't eaten in days and changing the world was hungry work. He was wearing a long black cloak, kind of inconspicuous but it was better being noticed than recognised.
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Post by Wraith on Nov 8, 2007 11:33:00 GMT -5
Wraith, already sat in a corner, glanced up as each entered immediately recognising them all but not saying anything, just lifting the newspaper he held higher to cover his face
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Post by Claire Benette on Nov 21, 2007 23:02:43 GMT -5
Claire walked back out of the kitchen carrying a tray with two coffees and a plate of pancakes. She carried it on one hand towards a table where two women and a small boy were sitting. She handed the drinks to the women then gave the boy his pancakes. "Enjoy hun", she said sweetly before taking the tray back to the kitchen.
Her next stop was Wraith's table. "What can I get you?" she asked taking out her pad and pencil again. Then she noticed his face. "Wraith... haven't seen you in here for a while", she commented with a smile. "How are ya?"
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Post by Wraith on Nov 22, 2007 5:09:41 GMT -5
Wraith smiled and folded the paper he held, "I'm doing okay Claire, it's nice to see you around you know, what with everything going on, it gets a bit hectic, I'll have a large latte if I can please, I need the caffeine," he grinned happily
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Post by Sindi Symes on Mar 15, 2008 7:11:29 GMT -5
Sindi started reading a book she was lonely and board that is untill Sindi heard Claires name and she looked up, she spotted the young lady and recognised the gentalman that had helped her get to her concert and Sindi smiled before she turned back to her ook and continued reading.
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